To have our students take an interest in writing and be able to effectively do it on their own, we need to make it relatable and provide them with the skills necessary to do so. When I think back to when I first began writing papers in high school, I remember struggling… a lot. Writing hasn’t always been my best friend and maybe if some of my teachers had incorporated some of the ideas Gallagher mentioned or the poetry unit Coppola did, maybe it would’ve eased the stress of writing for me. Gallagher mentions exposing students to the importance and impact writing has on the real world around them. This goes back to the idea of basing the curriculum around the students and making it relatable to them. Displaying the areas in which writing is important exposes them to so many more doors to the reason as to why we write. It shows them how far beyond writing goes from school and the classroom. This is also seen when the student Sujaya writes her poem and mentions how she feels about being called “fake asian.” She found it easier to write down and read how she felt. By sharing her poem with the class, she was able to see the impact her words had on the world around her - even if it’s the smaller one of a classroom.
Another important facet is modeling
for the students the writing process one goes through when writing as an
example. Of course everyone is different so their process for writing might
differ from another person’s; however, when exposing students to a new concept,
it can be beneficial for them to see how someone who is familiar with the
process does it. Personally, I think this is a great idea and is something I
see done very often in my discipline of math and in so many others that is
makes sense for it to be done with writing as well. Thinking back to when I
was a high school student with little experience in writing, I think this would
have helped me tremendously, especially as a beginner. Lastly, Gallagher
mentions how helpful giving students examples of writing that correctly show
what it is you want them to do is for students. It’s one thing modeling for
them what you do and another what someone else does who is known for
their writing and uses it in their profession. This also allows for student
growth and shows them the different ways to ultimately do the same thing. This
might also help them find their own voice in writing.
For the longest time, writing
was strictly thought of as something that was solely done in an english
classroom, but now we know it’s something practiced in every discipline and
that means we have to help students build the skills to apply their writing
skills to the discipline they’re writing in. When it comes to math, I always
thought it was computational and all about precision, knowing the right
formulas and methods to use, and being able to take the little information
given to you and using it to see the bigger picture - essentially, I never
thought it had anything to do with writing whatsoever, that was until I was
introduced to proofs. Mathematical proofs are all about writing and being able
to effectively convey the mathematical process that is taking place; however,
the similar concept can be applied to any level of math. There’s writing in geometry
proofs, word problems, and explanations of answers of the solving process.
Wilson mentions how writing in math is mostly embedded in symbols and numbers
but that shouldn’t take away from the importance of words and writing for they
are the foundation. By teaching students how to properly read and analyze the
symbols, words, diagrams, numbers, etc. that make
up math, we’re also teaching them how to use it on their own.
I believe words are very powerful,
whether they be
spoken or written. By properly preparing our students to write and letting them
see that for themselves, I think we’re empowering them and showing them that
their voice matters.
Thank you for sharing, Belinda. I agree with incorporating relevance to a student’s life unto their learning. It’s been proven time and time again students better grasp academic material when they understand or are shown how it is aligned to the real world & why it matters to learn much material. Looking back at it, I feel as if my former math teachers taught this way, I would have probably been more interested in my math classes. Do you have any idea on how you plan to a student’s personal interests in your future math class? That sounds very interesting.
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DeleteI think incorporating that "Get to Know Your Students" survey we heard about in class is a great start and I go from there. Most of the fun things that incorporate student interests into the class are usually things that aren't part of the core curriculum, at least that's what I've found. But I did take an elective in HS about Math in Art and History of Math that incorporate art and history into math and that can interest students who art into that stuff. I've also learned about engineering and coding type of activities that can be incorporated into math classes in HS. I think the main thing is finding time to fit them into the core curriculum. I haven't taught yet, so this is all theories, essentially.
Hi Belinda,
ReplyDeleteTo focus on your point about the importance of teaching students the impact that writing has on the world around them, a lot of this work might be done by just opening up the definition of writing. I'd guess that when students think of writing, they think of a somewhat narrow definition. In one of the first readings for this course, many students reported on a survey that they did not read outside of school, but further questions revealed that they had active reading lives (of comic books, social media, and other types). To really impress upon students the significance of writing, we can broaden their definition of it to include modes of expression and persuasion like doodling in their notebook or composing a text to their parent asking if they can stay out late.
Robin, I appreciate the comment!
DeleteYou bring up a really great point, I remember reading that and it slipped my mind to apply it so thanks for the reminder!
I agree that reading is thought of in a one-dimensional way and it's funny to think that it also incorporates those other things you mention, but it's still relevant. I think by also making sure you're using those other texts we've been learning about and incorporating those into your lessons as a teacher, you'll not only expand that definition and meaning for your students, but you'll also be keeping them engaged. I also think that by using those other texts, you're also making it relevant to their interests.
I agree with making the lesson relevant to the students life. I believe that all students can learn, and then remember, a lesson far easier if the ideas being thought relate to their lives. If they don't relate, then you get the age old question from them, "how will I use this in my life?" But, if you relate the lesson to your students, they will carry it out of the classroom because if how use to them.
ReplyDeletePatryk, thanks for the response!
DeleteI think every teacher has gotten that "how will I use this?" question and by doing what you're recommending - making it relevant - they'll be able to make those connections. I also think it's just as important to relate what you're teaching them to other subjects they're learning (like maybe history and english or math and physics etc.) so that it also makes it relates to their world in school. I think also reminding them where they can find your discipline in the real world can also ground what they're learning. For instance, sports analysts do math and journalists use historical texts, stuff like that.
Thank you for your post. I agree with the idea that "making it relatable to students" in order to arouse their interest in learning. Indeed, teachers ought to show relevance that writing has to students lives in order to let them realize the importance of writing spontaneously. Most of the time students need an interpretation of the necessity of the knowledges and skills they learn, then they might turn to be active learners from passive learners. If teachers do not show and teach students how the skills and knowledges can be used in their world, it might be difficult to engage students in learning.
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to leave a comment, Yutong!
DeleteI agree with you in that if teachers don't show students how what they're can be applicable to their lives, they might lose interest and it may be harder for them to learn what you're trying to teach them. I remember back in HS in certain classes I took, if it didn't pertain to my life and catch my interest, the information went in one ear and out the other. I don't want to do that to my students! I think that by taking the time to get to know your students and taking what you're learning from them and using it as an activity that relates to your discipline, it can do wonders for them! And getting to know them doesn't take a lot of effort, honestly. You can just ask them a few questions or have them fill out one of those surveys we learned about and boom, you got yourself a lot to build off of. Also, nowadays you can find all kinds of ways current teachers have applied their students interests into their classrooms. It just takes some searching.
Thank you for your post. I agree that modeling writing and reading strategies for students is so important to helping with literacy skills. This would have really helped me in my high school science courses. I always considered myself a good writer/reader (at least in English and History) but my science classes were another story. I struggled very much to read and understand what the texts were telling us. Had a teacher adopted this strategy with me I might have excelled more. I think this is a really good strategy to adopt in the classroom. It also helps in regard to the idea of reading with empathy that is so important in history. If, for example, I do a guided reading with my students, I could offer questions and comments that bolster empathy and understanding, this could help students grow their understanding down the line.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment, Dane!
DeleteI'm sorry to hear that your science teachers didn't make that connection for you. But I'm glad that you're now able to see what you were lacking and can now make those connections yourself for your future/current students! I think that's what's most important! But I totally feel you on that. I've always been an avid reader so when it came to reading, it caught my interest. I remember when I took the ACT, I did very well on the reading portion but I did terrible in science - even though it was mostly reading. That was because, same as you, no one taught me how to properly read science texts. If someone had, maybe I would've done better and wouldn't be so afraid of science.
Hi Belinda. I agree with that exposing students to the importance and impact writing has on the real world around them. When I think back to when I do the homework about writing, I remember that it is easier for me to write a story about my daily life than an argumentative article. So maybe we could let our students practice their writing capability in writing about topics related to their lives.
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DeleteI think that's a great idea! It's important to realize as a teacher that you're going to get a variety of learners in your classroom. I think by getting to know them and how they learn and think about your discipline, you're not only going to make learning for them easier, but you're also going to be more adaptable as a teacher.
Belinda,
ReplyDeleteI think many of our students share experience with you in that they believe that writing is only for English class and not the other disciplines; and as we have been reading, this cannot be further from the truth. That is why I believe that educators should always empathize the importance or reading and writing in each discipline. Also it is important to make students aware that they already engage in this practice in, maybe, an informal way.
Thank you for your response!
DeleteI completely agree with you. I think someone else mentioned this idea, but I think if all teachers were to get on board that reading and writing is equally as important in all disciplines, the students will catch on to that concept too. That may be hard to do, but I think if you yourself can do it in your own classroom and set those standards or even reach out to the other teachers in your department or grade level, you can make that happen.
"Wilson mentions how writing in math is mostly embedded in symbols and numbers but that shouldn’t take away from the importance of words and writing for they are the foundation. By teaching students how to properly read and analyze the symbols, words, diagrams, numbers, etc. that make up math, we’re also teaching them how to use it on their own." I think this can also connect back to the Ghallager writings as well. Not only should we teach the students to read mathematics, but also make students work hands on with these symbols and give them a real world context. When they can work with and read the mathematics given to them, then they will be able to use it on their own. I think the hard part about the mathematical proofs you shared and the symbols used in math is that they are so often taught as rote vocabulary. (In college) we assume students know that the "backwards E" means there exists, but how could you explain this idea to a high school-er. By using some of Ghallagers techniques (express and reflect, inform and explain, evaluate and judge, etc.) students learn to better use their mathematics and see that they are not only learning some symbols and formulas, but logic and ways to defend their arguments. -Kiley
ReplyDeleteHey Kiley! Thanks for your comment!
DeleteI really like that idea you proposed towards the end. I think when it comes to math, it's been taught in the same structure of "I talk, you write and mimic what I'm doing" and that's not beneficial to many people. If we move passed that and incorporate those ideas proposed by Gallagher, we can definitely make that happen. In math, it's so easy to get lost in the vocabulary and it may be hard to apply a method your teacher taught you to a problem if you don't completely understand it. I think by having them learn the logic, like you said, that can go so much farther for them.
Thank you for sharing! I totally agree that it will be beneficial to make material as relevant to students as possible. I think if students are shown how important writing is for them maybe they will like it more. It is important for them to know writing is not only for english class, but for other classes and life in general.
ReplyDeleteJackie, thank you for your response!
DeleteI also think it's important to make it as relevant as possible. One of the ways is by just reaching out to other teachers or even finding a community of teachers who make that the core of their lessons. I'm not sure if you've heard of it, but there's a group of teachers and people that are a part of Teachers for Social Justice and every year they have a curriculum fair that is all about that sort of thing! I recommend it!
I appreciate how you said writing happens in all discipline, not just english!
ReplyDeleteDestiny, thanks for the kind words!
DeletePersonally, I didn't really learn this until I was in college. It sucks to think that I spent so many years in school thinking this, but now I (and everyone who's learning things along with me) can teach this to their students and expand their learning!
The modeling aspect of the readings that you mentioned was incredibly interesting to me and something that I have never considered or thought about. There is so much of school that we try to model, but writing is usually not among that. I think that is great, but practical application i feel could be difficult. This could be quite challenging to do and could take up a chunk of class time. But this could very well be worth it for the life long skill that is associated with writing. Thoughts?
ReplyDeleteHey Kyle! Thanks for the comment!
DeleteAs I was thinking about how we could incorporate the importance of writing into any classroom, I too thought that it would take a lot of time and effort, but you're right, it's worth it! I think it may be hard to think of how to incorporate it at first - I even struggle thinking about it - but there's so many resources out there that current teachers have used and it just takes some time to research and figure out how you can use it in your classroom. But I think once you find something you want to use, test it out in your classroom, make changes for the future classes you'll be teaching, you may find it to be easier than you once thought. It just takes some time.
I appreciate the details in your paper, including your opinion regarding the reading. I feel there is a lot you wrote regarding the concepts that should be introduced, to welcome students into reading and writing, and even the use of poetry. I agree with your idea of encouraging writing in the classroom beyond just having it in English in order to help students think about writing and how it can be applied to different areas. I remember not being a fan of writing a lot not because I didn't like but because of the idea of just making your point short and sweat in the sense that there wasn't a lot of writing being empathized outside of English/Writing class.
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